Analysis of Among the Roses



Its scarlet color burning inwardly
 Yearning to discover my secret garden
 A warm dew running down its vine
 How can such simplicity and beauty
 Create an erotic love

Its smoothness brushes my skin
 My body pulses with every encounter
 My sweet pleasures arouse me
 I've never known such softness
 Never known such intense ardor

Its loveliness and lustre
 Make me feel so tender and sensual
 Am I becoming delirious
 My mind strays into a beautiful garden
 My body lays beneath wild flowers

It remains vibrant
 Not a petal wilts
 It brings many divine pleasures
 I want it to last
 Forever among the roses

© All Rigths Reserved, Saby J.R.


Scheme ABXAX XCADC CXDBE XXEXX C
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010100 10101011010 01110111 1110100010 0110101 1101011 110101100010 1110011 1101110 10110110 11010 1111100100 110100100 11101010010 110101110 10110 10101 11100110 11111 01001010 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 638
Words 112
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on October 05, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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