Analysis of Amok!



Triangles - everywhere! Fluid body movement...
Just one more step to feeding...
Worth dying by his blade, fast enemy!
No choice, I must defeat him!

My knife, my soul, my heart - we're one!
Another slash and parry!
Disarm, and harm that's my intent!
Given the chance - he will not spare me!

I fake a nine, and drive for interception!
The biceps slashed to s##t!
No time to think, the agony, the bleeding!
Another strike, another gashing slit!

I'm running out of time...

No chance to think, no flash before the eyes
Just concentration, breathing...
One step away from death - one understands
What's like to be a man that's living...

Here comes the strike! The block! The counter!
He got me good... I GUT him better!
We stare... into each other's eyes
In silent honor, our farewell forever

So many things, in so few minutes
The pain! So sweet - inhaling air...
The rain - rejuvenating...
But he is gone and does not care...

I soon forget the blood that's on the ground...
And scan the other men that stand around

Beware! All, who's looking for a challenge!


Scheme XABX CBXB CBAX X DAXA EEDE XFAF GG X
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101010 1111110 1101111100 1111011 11111111 0101010 01011101 100111111 1101011010 011111 11110100010 010101011 110111 1111110101 101010 110111101 111101110 110101010 111111110 11011101 01010101010 110101110 01110101 010100 11110111 1101011101 0101011101 0111101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,026
Words 190
Sentences 29
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1, 4, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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