Analysis of Altar Stone



Silent flow sweet river Wye, banks upon lay ruins curst
watched years of mankind's fear, Cistercian sect now lays
success ruled principles, simple souls in each so versed
obedience, poverty, chastity, prayer did a life comprise.

What ends such gracious theme; buys death to living bond
cast humane nature to knee, stones to ruins as now found
question gives not answer for such cleave hallowed ground
on earth is ghostly rise giving seethe to dead now crowned.

New birth opens passage, faith yet walks upon nave lawn
nights full moon arises, stones drape death's prone fawn
darkened shadows fly as dreaded multitudes praise spawn
glean in thirst for life, chills feed midnight's carrion.

In dark night shuffle souls chosen of minds last breath
rancid in lives of man, remembered not as such was Seth
in silent offer gist, a life steps stormy dance of death
speaks a fright in murmur parse, empathetic letter heth.

Center stood in mists, a fetid theca covered altar stone
once held faiths gift, now lost souls lyric croons bemoan
call out to heaven in life's search, one prays men atone
reap in quiet strength, cause deaths swallow to dethrone.


Scheme AXAX AAAA BBXX CCCC DDDD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Metre 10111011011101 111111010111 0111001010111 0100100100110101 111101111101 10110111110111 101110111101 1111011011111 1110101110111 11101011111 10111101011 10111111100 011101101111 10011101011111 01010101110111 1010101010101 10101010110101 111111110101 1111001111101 101011110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,124
Words 194
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on January 23, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Michael Walker

61, Midwest USA, Veteran, ex-cop, writer (got a BA in film to be a better writer for the industry), poet, lyricist, just finished a sci-fi novella, working on a horror novella, waiting until after the November elections to do the final edit on a non-fiction book that's anti-politics and anti IRS - currently 444 pages. Did numerous positions with Live TV working with the Big 10 and ESPN - always liked Camera #4 position, right on the field with the action up close and personal. Soon to be a great grandfather. Damn... more…

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