Analysis of across feathered skies



...and as if it wasn't enough
to see me reflected in your eyes,
I found someone who loved me
without passion's sweet disguise.

The moment souls connected,
enclosed in messaged miles,
you saw inside this soul of mine
and dried the tears I cried.

I love to feel your laughter
wrap around my feminine frame,
and know it was because of me
your joy is set aflame.

I wish to love you like no other,
watch you sleep in peaceful dreams,
to cuddle closer to your form
and rest in love's light beams.


Scheme XABA XXXX CDBD CEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 01111001 111010011 111111 011101 0101010 01011 11011111 010111 1111110 10111001 01110111 111101 111111110 1110101 11010111 010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 475
Words 93
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Storm

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ NOTE: 5 Feb 2011 - Dear All, I have deleted and then reinstated all my poems on my page so I could get rid of the bad atmosphere, 1-ratings and nasty tags there have been of late. I know this means I won't be in the leaderboard but that's OK.I want to start anew and more importantly, see if the number of rates match the reviews. If poems continue to be 1-rated, then I will know that Ian is/was not the only one cheating here.I apologise to all those who have previously commented on my poems. I am sorry your comments are no longer there.I regret any inconvenience caused. Happy writing to all! :)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I am an enigma wrapped in a mystery ~ a flowerchild of the Universe. I am well travelled and love learning about different cultures.I have been writing poetry for 30 years, the last three of which I have written in earnest.I laugh my way through life and tears, searching for enlightenment. I don't suffer fools gladly.I am here to write, it is my passion. I am influenced by music, lyrics and the poetry of many people, too many to mention.I don't like pedestrian poetry or purple prose. I am never content with my poems, always striving to improve. I welcome critique. more…

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