Analysis of A Life Lost



On August twenty fifth nineteen eighty two
God blessed us with baby number two.
The nurse placed him gently in his Daddy's arms
and the look in his eyes made my heart grow warm.
He looks like an injun, you said with a grin
But little did we know the kind of trouble we'd soon be in.
He was blessed with his Daddy's sky blue eyes that
could pierce your soul and make it shine.
He was nothing less than a work of art
and we three loved him with all our heart.
He was taken from us at a tender young age
And our hearts are now filled with sorrow and rage.
So, Dear God I ask you for only these things
Help his Father and Brother
And most of all God
Keep Travis enveloped in Angel wings


Scheme AABCDDEFGGHHIJKI
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111101 111110101 01111001101 00101111111 1111111101 110111011101110 11111101111 11110111 1110110111 0111111101 111011101011 010111111001 11111111011 1110010 01111 1100100101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 667
Words 139
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 533
Words per stanza (avg) 139
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Submitted on April 25, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lieselotte Emery

Poetry to me is a vacation, an outlet, a good cry, and laughter till your sides ache. I cannot remember a time when I did not read or write poetry, and will continue to do so until my eyes close for the last time. more…

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