Analysis of A fraction of the whole



A FRACTION OF THE WHOLE
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I am the glorious fraction of the supreme whole
On funny but meaningful excursion of life's goal

Exiting painful,confused dark window of the night
Entering Into blissful Lighted door of God Gifted life

Life is not a meaningless word written on the water
Leave your remarkable seal on the Earth,my daughter

Watch a school going boy and,girl is knitting the wool
Only Oranges are not fruit,so enjoy watermelons cool

Morning sun rays swaying at floor a golden boast
A wife serves her husband jam piled high on a toast

Outside the window,the romantic peacock is dancing
A gentleman wearing V shaped blue sweater is glancing

The young neighbor lady smiles while washing the dresses
And going to office,her husband kisses her softly and blesses

Grandfather sips cup of coffee with fresh cookies in backyard
Grandmother walks barefoot on grass looking at her bodyguard

Thanks God for all you have full stomach, a little or,plenty
Learn to content with whatever you have nothing or empty

~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~


Scheme A AA BX CC XX DD EE XX FF BX X
Poetic Form
Metre 010101 1 1101001010011 1101100010111 1001110101 100011010111101 11101001101010 110100110110 101101111001 10100111011001 101110110101 011010111101 11010101110 01001011110110 0110101110010 010111010010010 1011110111001 101111101010 1111111100101 11101101110110 110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,031
Words 180
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on March 20, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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