Analysis of A Different Taste of Pleasure
Under the sun rays I woke up, next by you.
My pack of cigarettes is empty with nothing.
Your pillow is wet from last night with your tears.
I loved you, and still I love you in my heart.
I kissed and drank of your floods of your lips.
But yesterday, our emotions disappointed our fears.
You dreamed of me, and I cuddled your soul.
You missed those affectionate moments with me.
We both had much passionate, but our griefs cut off.
We knocked on the chances gate, last night.
We rush as if the destiny fool our feelings for once.
We were loyal for our first night together, with a candle.
We smiled so our hearts skipped a few beats.
We touched our warming bodies, kissed more then
Once, and we jumped above the bed, under the blanket.
You screamed lower of my powerful moves, and
I stopped minutes after, we had cried with hidden tears,
Watching ourselves having a different taste of pleasure ended.
I wondered why we finished, faster then my burning
Cigarettes, even faster then watching you drinking your
Cup of red wine, I didn't gave up but I can't feel the same with you.
Woman stop crying with useless tears, and hold my
Hands and dance slowly on my yearnings, therefore I can
Share the real pleasure with a different and unique taste of pleasure.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10011111111 11101110110 11011111111 11101111011 1101111111 11010010010101 1111011011 11101001011 1111100110111 111010111 111101001101011 1010110110101010 1111011011 11101010111 1011010110010 11101110010 1110101111101 10001100100111010 1101110101110 0110101101101 11111101111110111 101101101011 101101110111 10110101000011110 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,240 |
Words | 231 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 41 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 123 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
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Submitted on June 02, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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