Analysis of a days dream
i drown in the depth of her eyes as i approach her by the window.
and by the middle of that short walk, im lost.
i can't hardly breath as she flips her hair and in the wind it flows.
reaks of danger approaches to my fragile heart tormented to a cause.
ravaged by time, my body's been badly hurt,
was it by that smile thau stabbed me in front?
i can't hardly move, afraid of making myself funny.
but was that the real reason in my mind that i carry.
i tried to start a small talk but i can't speak.
my lips are muted with her beautys reak.
my bodies petrified as she asked me "why?".
oh,how i wish i could have answer her not with just a sigh.
tic-tac,tic-tac. .was that the sound of the clock?
but how come that i've heard it in the middle of a shock?
what was this feeling i felt inside?
when im with her i could not explain why.
and to my surprise, one day i saw myself falling.
i saw my entire soul deeply loving.
but i guess i'll remain a wild dreamer.
dreaming of the day i'll be with her. .
to cherish our love forever.
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Metre | 11001101110101010 01010111111 1110111101000111 11100101110110101 10111101101 1111111101 1110101110110 11101100111110 11110111111 111101011 1101011111 11111110011101 11011101101 11111110010101 111101101 1110111011 011011111110 11101011010 1111010110 101011110 110101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,005 |
Words | 209 |
Sentences | 24 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 21 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 777 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 207 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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