Analysis of A Day with you



Let's go sit under that big tree over there.
We will lie down; up to the sky we will stare.

We can guess at the shape of the clouds.
We will enjoy nature's music; it won't be loud.

Roll over rest your head on my shoulder.
We will have to leave soon; it is getting colder.

A few more minutes passes us by.
The touch of your hand makes me high.

You start to shiver from the cool breeze,
As we watch the leaves fall from the trees.

The clouds are rolling in; and its getting dark.
Give me one more kiss as you feel my heart.

Night is here, we must go.
We have to get home before the snow.

I will light a fire to warm you up;
Then off to bed so we can make love.


Scheme AA XX BB CC DD XX EE XX
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 11110111101 11111101111 111101101 110110101111 1101111110 111111111010 011101011 01111111 111101011 111011101 01110001101 1111111111 111111 111110101 1110101111 111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 643
Words 139
Sentences 14
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on July 27, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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