Analysis of "baptized" a poem in free verse #25 revised :-)



In her holy water,
to which in ever after,
she drinks from the altar,
to be put on the chosen porch.

Reasons see in ever me,
lend me cliffs, to wash my dirty knees,
waterfalls let me see alive to be myself,
one so ever felt, flows so true, to please herself.
Rainbows hue to cope in her love that I sow,
washed in promise that I have in truth,
knelt on my knees to please this felt,
treasures seek in skies that heal.

Roses felt in eyes help to see,
thou splendour seed of this loves realm.
In her love I kneel,
for I've fallen in love,
to see from her altar,
from her porch,
that fell on soft pillows,
of her heart felt,
from the seed,
of her soul,
grazed by the wings,
that saved me.

Let me take her hand,on the shadows,
pillowed roses fell from her eyes that help,
to soar on wings to fly from her heartstrings,
to hear the rapture inside of me,
when the angels sing it flows of gold,
on her porch from her swings,
from the altar of her true being,
I kneel in GODS presence,
to sow the roses help flowing,
into wine unto my forsaken hands.

I'll be true,
to take a ride,
to rise,
up off my knees,
in her holy water,
from which I drink,
from the altar,
to be on her porch,
to her chosen path.


Scheme Aaab cdeexxfg cxgxabhfxxic hxdcxijxjx xxxdAxabx
Poetic Form
Metre 001010 1101010 111010 11110101 1010101 111111101 1011101111 111011111101 1111001111 101011101 11111111 1010111 10101111 1111111 00111 111001 111010 101 111110 1011 101 101 1101 111 1110101 110110111 111111101 110100111 101011111 101101 101010110 110110 11010110 0111010101 111 1101 11 1111 001010 1111 1010 11101 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,151
Words 241
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 12, 10, 9
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 181
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 25, 2023

1:12 min read
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Steven Louis Chapman

Steven was adopted, his biological father was an English professor who had an affair with a student. Writing poetry is an outlet for his expression of love. A hopeless romantic in search of his soul mate. (it changes from now and then) He hopes to capture the girl of his dreams through poetry. Visit my blog at http://thedailypoetrss.blogspot.com/ for the latest up to date poems. more…

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