Analysis of sunday vows

SethJade 1970 (SINT-niklaas)



as we all quite know
the signs lay down there held up
as the sun rises from north
an unexpected daylight's glimmer
soothes for the surface underneath
"the belly of concrete "

she is the light the face on the sea
Sunday morning breaking through
on the edge of stoned satisfaction
clambers from an hidden secret
peeling of the rages skin,
of a sloughs of embarking thoughts

is the sun the kindhearted villain
and me a little bit angelic stranger
to convert the silence raffled the pawned edges
the past in the future and the future in the past
the presence is zero daffodils
in a garden where the Sunday morning host,
claims that righteousness is beyond

the passion strikes in memory lane
picture blown trough a rush of wind
is my sunrise my lucky demon
my friend desires me willingly
as so dos the naked trust of believe

inflicted with the storm
between this quite moment
my sorrow despondence danseuse
the beams of the sun
on my face gladly known
passion strides for dusk and rain
as the settlement cheers the sullen votes

the warmth of the sun
in the palm of my hands
when the light of the moon
breath trough this moment


Scheme XXXAXX BXCXXX CAXXXXX DXCBX XEBCXDX CXXE
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 0111111 1011011 1010110 1101001 010101 110101101 110101 10111010 1111010 1010101 10110101 1010110 0101011010 11001010110 0100100010001 01011010 0010101101 11100101 010101001 10110111 11111010 110101100 1110101101 010101 011110 11011 01101 111101 1011101 1010010101 01101 001111 101101 11110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,097
Words 206
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 7, 5, 7, 4
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted by SethJade on February 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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