Analysis of Paranoia

Jase Lucero Pinski 2003 (Great Falls)



Paranoia
Silence
Your walking
hear nobody talking
Feel someone stalking
Shiver is shocking
Silence
A sound
Behind you the ground
Feet go pound
From fright your bound
Can't look around
Silence
Break in your fear
Nothing is clear
something is near
Eyes now tear
Silence
Put distance between
Something not seen
Air seems not clean
Grass not green
Silence
Nothings the same
It calls out your name
You play it's deadly game
A monster you cant tame
Silence
Now you pay
You die or you slay
You won't last another day
Choose black or choose gray
Silence
You grab the gun
This game isn't fun
You just wanted the sun
But now your done
BANG
Silence
Copyright © Jase Pinski | Year Posted 2021


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (55%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 010 10 110 1110 1110 10110 10 01 01101 111 1111 1101 10 1011 1011 1011 111 10 11001 1011 1111 111 10 1001 11111 111101 010111 10 111 11111 1110101 11111 10 1101 11101 111001 1111 1 10 1011110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 645
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 40
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 551
Words per stanza (avg) 124
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Submitted on January 29, 2021

Modified on April 21, 2023

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