Analysis of Heavenly Thoughts



There's no time to mourn its time to celebrate,
 I'll be here when you get here by the big golden gates,
I look different but it's me with gleaming eyes and a smile on my face,
I asked God to make room & now I got space,
I sleep under God's Grace, which means I'm really awake,
Where peace is not a theme or meme, its a DNA Spiritual Trait,
I no longer wonder, increased power & spiritual hunger,
I am rain and thunder, Glory be too God and yes my physical times up,  runneth over is my cup,
It was fun but in Christ I must now turn up,
Another place another time, the destination is so devine,
Keep me in your hearts and mind, and over you like a halo I will shine.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 672
Words 145
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 505
Words per stanza (avg) 136
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Submitted by JhainDoh on January 21, 2021

Modified by JhainDoh on December 19, 2023

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Death is sad but I want to explore the beauty in death. I am most free when I write so I will write ugly beautiful truths. I hope to inspire teach and motivate through poetry. The Poetry Form is my Coinage known as Unorthodox Rhythmic which is a melodic form of writing. Currently I am a Song Writer also on Reverberation. Writing is my world andI write Advertisments/Commercials/& Comedy. Skies the limit and beyond write what you like. more…

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