Analysis of Alcestis



Not long the living weep above their dead,
And you will grieve, Admetus, but not long.
The winter's silence in these desolate halls
Will break with April's laughter on your lips;
The bees among the flowers, the birds that mate,
The widowed year, grown gaunt with memory
And yearning toward the summer's fruits, will come
With lotus comfort, feeding all your veins.
The vining brier will crawl across my grave,
And you will woo another in my stead.
Those tender, foolish names you called me by,
Your passionate kiss that clung unsatisfied,
The pressure of your hand, when dark night hushed
Life's busy stir, and left us two alone,
Will you remember? or, when dawn creeps in,
And you bend o'er another's pillowed head,
Seeing sleep's loosened hair about her face,
Until her low love-laughter welcomes you,
Will you, down-gazing at her waking eyes,
Forget?
So have I loved you, my Admetus,
I thank the cruel fates who clip my life
To lengthen yours, they tarry not for age
To dim my eye and blanch my cheek, but now
Take me, while my lips are sweet to you
And youth hides yet amid this hair of mine,
Brown in the shadow, golden in the light.
Bend down and kiss me, dying for your sake,
Not gratefully, but sadly, love's farewell;
And if the flowering year's oblivion
Lend a new passion to thy life, far down
In the dim Stygian shadows wandering,
I will not know, but still will cherish there,
Where no change comes, thy love upon my lips.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIAJKLMNAOPQRCSTUPVWXYZ1 2 3 D
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010111 01111111 01010011001 1111010111 01010100111 0101111100 01001010111 1101010111 01010110111 0111010011 1101011111 1100111010 0101111111 1101011101 1101011110 0111001011 1011010101 0101110101 1111010101 01 1111111 1101011111 1101110111 1111011111 111111111 0111011111 100110001 1101110111 110011011 01010010100 1011011111 0011001100 1111111101 1111110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,402
Words 259
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,119
Words per stanza (avg) 259
Font size:
 

Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:20 min read
8

John Charles McNeill

John Charles McNeill (1874-1907) was a Wake Forest alumni and one of North Carolina's most celebrated poets. His published works include Songs of Merry and Sad and Lyrics From the Cotton Land, the latter of which was published posthumously. more…

All John Charles McNeill poems | John Charles McNeill Books

0 fans

Discuss this John Charles McNeill poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Alcestis" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 12 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/55849/alcestis>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    John Charles McNeill

    »

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    19
    days
    13
    hours
    5
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Sestina is made up of how many lines?
    A 28
    B 36
    C 39
    D 6