Analysis of Lie Down on Me



I wait for you in the moonlight
In the quiet of the night
Within this room that holds
So many moments of your life

The dreams you've dreamed
Still linger here
Between these flower-papered walls
That look beyond the window
At the Autumn leaves that fall

A quilted robe lies draped across
A wicker rocking chair
That held you and rocked you
When grief
Was more than you could bear

A bassinet now empty
Where once a baby slept
Remains enshrined
Chained to a time
By the million tears you wept

A picture of a handsome man
With you there by his side
A bride and groom so in love
With stardust in their eyes

Stands behind a pane of glass
Within a gilded frame
Where your lip prints and
finger prints
On its surface..still remain

And now...
I hear your slippers
As they slide across the floor
And I hear...
Your laboured breathing
Outside this bedroom door

And  I know that soon
I'll hold you
Here in this flower-papered room
And soothe your old
And frail body
In the light of a silver moon

I...your old companion
An antique Rosewood Bed
Let me hold you...Mary Beth
I..the best friend you've ever had

Let me hold you through the night
And bring you back...again
Sweet Mary Beth
Into the morning light.


Scheme AAXX XBXXX XCDXC EFXXF GXXX XXXXX XXHBXH IDXXEI XXJX AGJA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111001 0010101 011111 11010111 0111 1101 01110101 1101010 1010111 01011101 010101 111011 11 111111 01110 110101 0101 1101 1010111 01010101 111111 0101101 11011 1010111 010101 11110 101 11101 01 11110 1110101 011 1110 11111 01111 111 10110101 0111 0110 00110101 11010 10111 11111 1111101 1111101 0111 1101 010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,152
Words 226
Sentences 8
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 5, 5, 4, 5, 6, 6, 4, 4
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on June 14, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Elaine C. George

Not to be confused with other poets by the name of Elaine George, I am Elaine Cecelia George, born on the 27th day of November in the year 1946 in the city of Saint John, New Brunswick, Canada.   (Violin, Snowflake, A Winter Rose, From my Porch, The Love of a Gentleman, Where the Heart Resides, One Regret, The Tide of Time, and the Promise of Spring), have been published in various books and magazines and school books.  Some are being used as teaching tools for poetry classes offered on websites, most without my permission, nonetheless, I am honoured. One  poetry website has given credit to another Elaine George from England for my personification poem, 'SNOWFLAKE.  I have asked them several times to correct this, but it still remains unchanged. Since 2006, in addition to my books of poetry, I have had several short stories and A book entitled, 'Earthbound Angels made of Stone, A epic story written by me in a collaboration with The Canadian Photographer, Darren Creighton. I am currently writing a historical fiction thriller entitled, Out of the Darkness. I hope to have it completed before the year end. more…

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