Analysis of I go on forever



Life goes tough, roads seem rough,
I went, I go, I go on forever....

The boats sails, the idea fails,
I tried, I try, I try on forever....

Eyes filled with tear, no one to hear,
I cried, I cry, I cry on forever....

When troubles fear, came a lovely dear,
I laughed, I laugh, I laugh on forever....

I compromise, to keep my promise,
I made, I make, I make on forever....

Society full of myth, I never agree with,
I broke, I break, I break on forever....

I love you, you love me,
I thought, I think, I think on forever....

I bear pain, why pain always rain,
I beared, I bear, I bear on forever....

The mountains shine, the opportunities line,
I jump, I jumped, I jumped on forever....

I want to loose fur, as it never lure,
I threw, I throw, I throw on forever....

The eyes closed, the breathing slows,
I live, I died, I died for forever....


Scheme XA XA XA XA XA XA XA XA XA XA XA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111111010 01100101 1111111010 11111111 1111111010 110110101 1111111010 11011110 1111111010 0100111110011 1111111010 111111 1111111010 1111111 1111111010 0101001001 1111111010 1111111101 1111111010 0110101 1111111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 839
Words 163
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted by on May 27, 2020

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Naila Rais

Naila Rais is a student of AMU . She loves to pen her feelings . Her aim is to motivate younger minds. more…

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