Analysis of Hope of freedom



Long long ago in a village
I saw a beautiful bird sitting in a cage
it seemed as if the bird was fake at it didn't move
but if you looked in her eyes, you will presume
that she is crying for hope, a reason to live but I couldn't express
as the courage of that bird got depressed

days and nights passed by and she didn't move or sleep
By looking at her condition I started to weep
but one day another bird came to her and she moved
tweaking each other through the bars of the activity
it seemed as if the bird in the cage was reborn

the bird had found a hope to live
and then kept trying to escape
the flames of her courage were ignited
by the will of getting out

the morrow I looked at the cage and couldn't believe my eyes
the bird was out in the moonlight of the night
It wouldn't have been possible without the hope she got
from the other birds' message that he brought


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Poetic Form
Metre 11010010 110100110001 1111011111101 11110011101 111101101011111001 1010111101 101110110111 1101001011011 1110101110011 10110101100100 111101001111 01110111 01110101 0110100010 1011101 010111010100111 0111001101 11011100010111 1010110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 875
Words 177
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 172
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted by ishan8902 on April 12, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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