Analysis of Why don't you like me????



Why do you find a problem with everything I do ...
You claim too follow god...
But,even god can see through you ...
Is that the way your god work ????
Is that the one whom you serve??
My god accepts everyone at every turn ....
Grace isn't something you have to earn...
It is something greatly giving ...
So I ask you ....Cant you give me some??
Could your heart be so callus ,marred, & broken..
That even you cant see...
How can you love Jesus?
If you can't even live with me..
Why don't you like me?
I care for you all the same...
I pray god demolish the strongholds in your life..
Allow peace to remain ....
Maybe than you will accept people for who they are....
And not as you would have them be...
Doesn't matter who you like ....
I love me....


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Poetic Form
Metre 111101011011 111101 111111 1101111 1101111 11011011001 110101111 11101010 111111111 1111110110 110111 111110 11110111 11111 1111101 11101001011 011101 1011101101111 01111111 1010111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 732
Words 141
Sentences 22
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 532
Words per stanza (avg) 147
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Submitted on December 25, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Tania thompson-Spencer

Tania has been writing poetry since the age of 11 with works that include overcomer. more…

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