Analysis of The Cloud

Charles Harpur 1813 (Windsor) – 1868 (Australia)



One summer morn, out of the sea-waves wild,
A speck-like Cloud, the season’s fated child,
Came softly floating up the boundless sky,
And o’er the sun-parched hills all brown and dry.
Onward she glided through the azure air,
Borne by its motion without toil or care,
When looking down in her ethereal joy,
She marked earth’s moilers at their hard employ;

“And oh!” she said, “that by some act of grace
’Twere mine to succour yon fierce-toiling race,
To give the hungry meat, the thirsty drink—
The thought of good is very sweet to think.”

The day advanced, and the cloud greater grew,
And greater; likewise her desire to do
Some charity to men had more and more,
As the long sultry summer day on wore,
Greatened and warmed within her fleecy breast,
Like a dove fledging in its downy nest.

The heat waxed fiercer, until all the land
Clared in the sun as ’twere a monstrous brand
And the shrunk rivers, few and far between,
Like molten metal lightened in the scene.
Ill could Earth’s sons endure their toilsome state,
Though still they laboured, for their need was great,
And many a long beseeching look they sped
Towards that fair cloud, with many a sigh that said:
“We famish for thy bounty! For our sake
O break thou! in a showery blessing, break!”

“I feel, and fain would help you, ” said the cloud,
And towards the earth her bounteous being bowed;
But then remem’bring a tradition she
Had in her youth learned from her native sea,
That when a cloud adventures from the skies
Too near the altar of the hills, it dies!
Awhile she wavered and was blown about
Hither and thither by the winds of doubt;
But in the midst of heaven at length all still
She stood; then suddenly, with a keen thrill
Of light, she said within herself, “I will!
Yea, in the glad strength of devotion, I Will help
you, though in helping you I die.”

Filled with this thought’s divinity, the cloud
Grew worldlike vast, as earthward more she bowed!
Oh, never erewhile had she dreamed her state
So great might be, beneficently great!
O’er the parched fields in her angelic love
She spread her wide wings like a brooding dove
Till as her purpose deepened, drawing near,
Divinely awful did her front appear,
And men and beasts all trembled at the view,
And the woods bowed, though well all creatures knew
That near in her, to every kind the same,
A great predestined benefactress came.

And then wide-flashed throughout her full-grown form
The glory of her will! the pain and storm
Of life’s dire dread of death, whose mortal threat
From Christ himself drew agonizing sweat,
Flashed seething out of rents amid her heaps
Of lowering gloom, and thence with arrowy leaps
Hissed jagging downward, till a sheety glare
Illumined all the illimitable air;
The thunder followed, a tremendous sound,
Loud doubling and reverberating round;
Strong was her will, but stronger yet the power
Of love, that now dissolved her in a shower,
Dropping in blessings to enrich the earth
With health and plenty at one blooming birth.

Far as the rain extended o’er the land,
A splendid bow the freshened landscape spanned
Like a celestial arc, hung in the air
By angel artists, to illumine there
The parting triumph of that spirit fair.
The rainbow vanished, but the blessing craved
Rested upon the land the cloud had saved.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101110111 0111010101 1101010101 0101111101 1011010101 1111001111 11010001001 111111101 0111111111 111111101 1101010101 0111110111 0101001101 0101001011 1100111101 1011010111 101010101 1011001101 0111001101 1001110101 0011010101 1101010001 111101111 111111111 01001010111 011111100111 1111101101 111001101 1101111101 0010101101 11100101 1001110101 1101010101 1101010111 0111001101 100110111 10011101111 1111001011 1111010111 100111010111 11010111 1111010001 11111111 110111101 111111 101100101 1101110101 1101010101 0101010101 0101110101 0011111101 11001100101 011011 0111010111 0101010101 1111111101 1101110001 1101110101 1100101111 11101011 0101011 0101000101 1100001001 11011101010 11110100010 1001010101 1101011101 1101010101 010101011 1001011001 11010111 0101011101 011010101 1001010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,318
Words 584
Sentences 19
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 6, 10, 13, 12, 14, 7
Lines Amount 74
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 322
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 21, 2023

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Charles Harpur

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