Analysis of A Vow To Myself



I asked for your blessing,
  instead you explained

What I should be paying
  to garner acclaim

You told me if only
  I’d do it this way

My words could have meaning
  and influence—sway

But power and fortune
  are not what I sought

If influence only
  gets brokered and bought

So the blessing passed over,
  no bribery done

A last vow to myself
  —from you I must run

(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2016)


Scheme AX AX BC AC DX BX XD XD X
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 01101 111110 11001 111110 11111 111110 01001 110010 11111 110010 11001 1010110 11001 01111 11111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 394
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on April 27, 2019

Modified on March 13, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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