Analysis of Collective Tapestry III



Every now and then we come across snap shot moments from our past something to grasp. We walk the miracle mile as if its the call of the wild. Through the innocent field and stream its good to dream. Of warm nights and faithful friends. Having so much fun with a hope it wouldn't end. These are a few of my recent poetic pieces I wish to share.

Cease The Day

love is not for the faint of heart
it is a sharpened arrow that aims to the heart
dig deep my friend you can grow to depend
upon Merigolds with Tulip hearts

love has gained it also has lost
humanties heaviest of cost
to reach out with both hands
lift up your heads

through chariots of fire

A Good Cause To Smile

lift up your head
to wake the dead
walk the miracle mile
to know all the great while

first cut is the deepest
with this I must insist
carry away by a blind masquerade
to be two places at once

to late for lunch

The Sequential Pier

Spanish eyes in the train station
staying calm in the room
giving cadence to the simple
the cause for its sonic boom

the pier was lovely
on that new day's spring
a fare maiden was wearing an elegant ring
think deep dig deeper

then ever before
lest I implore another open door

I thirst for pillars in its vacant course
through shadows that block its vortex
life is made simple
must live it out in harmony

seeking a destiny
living a dream
this course that I'm taking
no time for faking

shadows block the cadence

Silence To All

shades of shame to weaken
eating like a vegan
carry on with a song
faint of heart to impart

walking the miracle mile
the smile from a lonesome child
great call from the wild
to take it all in

lingering on with a song in your heart


Scheme X X AAXX XXXX B C DDCC XXXE X X FGHG IJJB KK XXHI IXJJ E X FFXA CLLX A
Poetic Form
Metre 1001011101111011011011110100111101101101001011111111010110111101110111011110010101111 101 11110111 110101011101 1111111101 0111101 11111011 110011 111111 1111 1100110 01111 1111 1101 101001 111011 111010 111101 100110101 1111011 1111 00101 10100110 101001 10101010 0111101 01110 11111 011011011001 11110 11001 1101010101 1111001101 1111110 11110 11110100 100100 1001 111110 11110 11010 1011 111110 101010 101101 111101 1001001 0110101 11101 11110 1001101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,622
Words 327
Sentences 7
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 4, 1, 1, 4, 4, 1, 1, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 1, 1, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted by hitalot on May 15, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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