Analysis of Let Go & Let God



love the grey in a lazy day bridge the gap in my dreams through twisted schemes
filter through the notion of belonging mark the longing get a following
we are in this til the end my faithful friend with whom I can depend
inside I have rollercoaster emotions with the ups & downs
take a walk on the beach try to catch that frisbee way out of reach
love the longing of belonging there's a yearning hearts are turning
take a shower in the hour of power nestled in a memory come to sit next to me
Each man chooses their own destiny call it magical chemistry from when you were a memory

Rise to the occasion with soaring hearts as in some decorated mast to impart
love is basking in the jewels of renewal carry on with a song in your heart
love is the mere tenderness of the given moment from a sought after vintage smile
comfort me to the conclaves of lasting love soon you will discover a heart to unfold
many are living in mere fantasy basking in the leaves or newly fallen snow
hearts would unfold some time a go the notion of surrender

Come with me to the sea of tranquility lost in a dream feel the breeze
Tea leaves with Leonard Cohen singing basking in the vast expanse between time & space
Surrender to the moment with cadence as its following and deep heart belonging
the tender moments of belonging soaring like an eagles to parts unknown
Caress the bossom of softened decorum as we choose to be healed
the day is fast approaching and the night is far too spent
to quiver in the moment let the temporal vanish capture the longing

I sit alone above to dew left to groom a brand new view in what is left to do
give me a smile your support and your fantasies let them flourish let them unfold
Hear each passing wave rise to the occasion with the real remnants of nature
To equate laughter with forgiveness give pause to think being in the moment
one touch and one will rise with triumph in their eyes

The ability to let go and let God take over feelings to recapture prepared for the great here after...
arm me with harmony filtered through a dream give pause to breathe
Achieve your dreams to light the way of forgiveness the mere wanting to let go
Be compassionate when you learn to focus on your goals in which to unfold
like Stevie Wonder singing at your funeral learn role reversal
Choose to let go & let God each & every passing day


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Poetic Form
Metre 101001011010111101 1010101010101010100 11011011101111101 01111000101011 1011011111101111 1010101010101110 101000101101000100111111 1110111001110010011100100 11001011011011001101 111000101010101101011 110110010101010110101 101101110111101001101 101100110010001110101 110111010101010 111101101001001101 11110101010001010111 010101011011100011010 0101010101011101101 0101110010111111 01110100011111 1100010101001010010 110101111110111011111 11011010110011101101 1110111001010110110 1011010101111100010 110111110011 0010011101111010101001101110 111100101011111 0111110110100110111 1010011111011101101 11010101110011010 1111111100101
Characters 2,328
Words 444
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 7, 5, 6
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 59
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 380
Words per stanza (avg) 89
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Submitted by hitalot on February 23, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:13 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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