Analysis of Heaven Waits (Blues Poem #15)



Counting spaces between the notes,
  the music came alive

The melody deepened, the band on fire,
  all bees have left the hive

Breathing in one fast refrain,
  my lungs too full to stop

An Angel melts his pearl baton,
  the Sirens blazing hot

New sounds created, harp destroyed,
  the clouds all push apart

As heaven waits for one last riff,
 —to claim my beating heart

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2018)


Scheme XA XA XX XX XB XB X
Poetic Form
Metre 10100101 010101 01001001110 111101 1001101 111111 11011101 010101 11010101 011101 11011111 111101 010010100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 400
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 14, 2018

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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