Analysis of A Scenic View



Let's just pretend you can take a trusted from on a road trip down by the sea
as a beacon of light to a hurting friend in need
we have created a magic circle drowned in the rain
stop for lobsters maybe some baked crab we shall grab
through the pier we can see the dare in the eye of the  flight of the Albatross
yet as the weather gets bad we are left drowned in the rain

got to get back in the car amidst the near window pane
she blazed,
she kindled
out of the night
like a white star
We all boil at different degrees
one can equate in hidden apathy
Silently
time passes
The only life I have
submits to its power
some die looking for a hand do hold
On the other side of the resistance is the flow
the sounds of the nearby surf coming into the tide
my soul permeates the inner feeling of solace

the earth has music for those who listen
all the while I was a sinking vessel,
No lifeboat
No S.O.S
Salted wounds
to work until skin becomes bone white
for I have seen the truth and it doesn't make sense
golden nuggets of thought in viral personifications
And in the end,
we were all just
humans,
drunk on the idea
that love,
only love,
could heal
our brokenness
my very soul permeates a vision for being
out in the changeing of the season
then for some matter my friend just left me without any reason


Scheme AXBXXB BXXCXXAAXXXXXXX DXXAXCXAXXXXEEXAXDD
Poetic Form Etheree  (23%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1101111010110111101 1010111010101 11010010101001 111010111111 101111010011011010 11010111111001 11110010101101 11 110 1101 1011 111110001 1101010100 100 110 010111 11110 111010111 1010110010101 0110111100101 111001010110 0111011110 1011101010 11 11 101 110110111 111101011011 1010110101 0001 1011 10 110010 11 101 11 101 110110010110 10011010 1111011111011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,269
Words 261
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 15, 19
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 345
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Submitted by hitalot on November 12, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:18 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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