Analysis of Light Of The World Shine On Me



Calamity spreads his dirty wings
 Like a vulture, preying on the old and weak
 The helpless children, shaking and shivering
 But for a mother's touch

In the dim twilight, quiet red on the horizon
 We kiss him goodbye, slowly and torturously
 With dry, cracked lips and burnt, peeling skin
 The ache heavy in our shoulders and hearts restless for sunrise

He spreads his dusty wings cautiously, looking back
 But we do not. He flies away
 Slowly, heavily, weighted down by so much death and disease
 He is a sickness growing weary

Dying embers of a campfire,
 Mostly smoking, choking out the last bit of orange
 Heat as the moon makes a final exit from the sky
 He flies into a reborn sun

Reborn as we will be with the light on our faces
 A dingy feather lying still on the ground, a reminder
 He is a ghost now, a whisper, a silence
 But ready, always ready to return


Scheme XXXX AXXX XXXX BXXA XBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 010011101 10101010101 01010100100 110101 001110110010 11111001 111101101 011001010011011 111101100101 11111101 101001011111001 110101010 10101010 1010101011110 1101101010101 11010111 11111110111010 010101011010010 11011010010 110110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 852
Words 159
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted by hitalot on August 04, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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