Analysis of When The Words Won't Come (Blues Poem #13)



Whatchu gonna do when
  the trim is gone

Whatchu gonna do when
  the right turns wrong

Whatchu gonna do when
  the whistle blows

Whatchu gonna do when
  your feet say no

Whatchu gonna do when
  the man comes knockin

Whatchu gonna do when
  that devil’s laughin

Whatchu gonna do when
  your train don’t run

Whatchu gonna do when
  the words won’t come

(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2017)


Scheme Ax Ax Ax Ax Aa Aa Ax Ax x
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 0111 11011 0111 11011 0101 11011 1111 11011 0111 11011 1101 11011 1111 11011 0111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 378
Words 66
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on June 28, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

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