Analysis of Van Halen



Van Halen
a young kid running the streets of California
 Brother Alex playing on the pots & pans
 In time young Eddie bought a guitar
 hoping in his heart he'll go far

Although from that scene many years had passed
 still having every reason to grasp,
 A deep aura of musical talent intact
 Soon a band was formed with Diamond Dave, Alex, Michael & Ed

what was going on inside his head
 flirting with drugs along his path
 Working so hard anyone else would have a heart attack
 Eruption on stage with the wailing of his guitar 1984

Still time had passed and the parting of the ways with Diamond Dave
 Out of sadness there was new gladness with Sammy singing lead
 A break up with Valerie Bertenelli yet out came son Wolfie
 Hitting the streets again a brief excursion

A band with a talent unmatched still another parting of ways
 Then it was Mr. Cherona that fell apart at the seems to extreme
 Looking back today the band went all the way
 Shooting to the stars a reunited band with Diamond Dave again

Perhaps it's best to hold our breath and count to the number ten ?
 Eddie was and still is my biggest inspiration
 Now is a good time for the band to take a break on a long vacation.


Scheme AXXBB XXXC CXXB DCDE XXXA AEE
Poetic Form
Metre 110 01110011010 1010101011 011101001 10011111 111110111 1101001011 011011001001 10111110110101 111010111 10110111 1011101110101 101110101101 111100101011101 11101111110101 0111100111111 10010101010 0110100110101011 1111011101101101 10101011101 1010100101110101 0111111010110101 101011110010 110111011101101010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,180
Words 223
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 158
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted by hitalot on June 05, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:06 min read
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Mario William Vitale

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