Analysis of The Bricks You Lay



Is your house built out of certainty,
   are the walls made thin or stout

Is your mind filled up with questions,
  do you live in fear or doubt

Is your spirit free or servile,
  is your will unchained or slave

Is your heart the trowel you build with,
  and love,
  —the bricks you lay

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2017)


Scheme XA XA BX XXX B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 111111100 1011111 11111110 1110111 11101110 111111 111010111 01 0111 01001010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 316
Words 58
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 3, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on April 20, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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