Analysis of The Treadmill



Slowing down the motor,
  running low on gas

The lies, the HOV lane,
  the truth off in the grass

The speed counterproductive,
  it warps and then transforms

The magic in the stillness,
  the beauty heaven born

The light becomes a blurring,
  as darkness settles in

Till stepping off the madness,
  and travelling within

That fatal rush to judgment,
   a quiet now sustains

One choice to stop the treadmill,
  —all motion rearranged

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2017)


Scheme XA XA XX BX XC BC XX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 10111 01011 011001 011000 110101 0100010 010101 0101010 110100 1101010 010001 1101110 010101 111101 11001 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 460
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 14, 2017

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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