Analysis of Literate Quicksand



Did you edit away the fire,
  in your attempt to be correct

Do your words make you a liar,
  as they break and disconnect

Is that order you chased after,
 now deserted no-mans land

With your mind and spirit sinking,
—in a literate quicksand

(Villanova Pennsylvania: October, 2016)


Scheme AB AB AC XC A
Poetic Form
Metre 111001010 01011101 11111010 1110001 11101110 1010111 11101010 001001 010010010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 274
Words 48
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on October 18, 2016

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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