Analysis of God's Tracks



You can listen with hope,
  or listen in pain

But listen you shall,
  as my words will explain

"You were left in a tree trunk,
  neither hollow nor full

With a decision impending,
  a test of your will

Your words will define,
  what you praise or deny

Will they now come together,
  in the truth or a lie

Do you burrow on blindly,
  or tunnel beyond

What your comfort will dictate,
  what the blackness desponds

One choice lands in darkness,
  one reaches for light

My tracks through the shadows,
  your fear cannot light

It’s down to that moment,
  one last choice that defines

Will your soul choose redemption,
—or stay hidden unrhymed"

(Villanova Pennsylvania: August, 2016)


Scheme XA XA XX XX XB XB XC XD DE DE XD XC X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Metre 111011 11001 11011 111101 1010011 101011 10010010 01111 11101 111101 1111010 001101 1110110 11001 1110101 10101 111010 11011 11101 11101 111110 111101 1111010 11101 01001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 660
Words 116
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on August 09, 2016

Modified on March 14, 2023

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