Analysis of Casting Shame



By darkness I trolled,
in my oft-shedding skin

Hidden alleys I roamed,
for new victims at whim

But at last I must face
the deception I’ve wrought

And relive every memory,
that festers and rots

As the truth in rebellion,
turns its anger within

No forgive or forgetting,
or my blaming the gin

In the few moments left,
as I slither and weave

Still bearing false witness,
against those I’ve deceived

My venom gets swallowed,
death final and small

With the light I once blocked,
casting shame on it all

(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2016)


Scheme AB AX XA XX XB XB AX XA AC AC X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 011101 101011 111011 111111 001011 001100100 1101 1010010 111001 1011010 111001 001101 111001 110110 011101 110110 11001 101111 101111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 518
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on July 05, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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