Analysis of Original Sin



A battalion of feeling,
  a dead soldiers thoughts

A war of contrition,
  last battle not fought

Distant artillery,
  final shot from within

Its smoke covering over,
—the most original sin

(Villanova Pennsylvania: July, 2016)


Scheme XX XX XA XA X
Poetic Form
Metre 0010110 01101 011010 11011 100100 101101 1110010 0101001 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 219
Words 34
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on July 01, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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