Analysis of Redemption Near



Did you waste your life,
just making money

Did you eat the bread,
and not the honey

Did you sell your soul,
as the children watched

Was your heart left cold,
in a tinderbox

We’re your excuses detailed,
and your reasons poor

Did you wake up full,
and still ask for more

Were your blessings shunned,
as you scratched and clawed

Saying no harm done,
“I never broke the law”

Were you teeth all straightened,
and your motives bent

Were your eyes detached,
from what heaven sent

Are you memories lost,
in some dead refrain

As a lonely footnote,
to another’s name

If you had a chance,
to right this wrong

Would you hum in silence,
or break out in song

If you’re still alive,
the choice is clear

All joy awaits,
redemption near

(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2016)


Scheme XA XA XX XX XX XX BX XX BC XC XX XX XD XD XE XE X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11010 11101 01010 11111 10101 11111 0010 0101001 01101 11111 01111 01101 11101 10111 110101 011110 01101 01101 11101 111001 01101 10101 111 11101 1111 111010 11101 11101 0111 1101 0101 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 734
Words 138
Sentences 1
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on June 29, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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