Analysis of My Earth Moves



My earth moves round my three kids round the clock.
I need no new stars more; they are my all.
No stream is so much sweet as their voice is;
No nightingale so soothing as their call.

I have seen no flowers on earth like them.
No gem I know as precious as they are.
Like hymn, day and night I recite their names.
Within me they stay, they don't remain far.


Scheme XAXA XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111111101 1111111111 1111111111 1100110111 1111101111 1111110111 1110110111 0111111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 348
Words 72
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on November 26, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Sayeed Abubakar

b. 21 September 1972 in Bangladesh more…

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