Analysis of Veni Vidi Vici



VENI VIDI VICI
The World Cup Competition 2015.

All eyes were on New Zealand to lift the cherished prize
World Champions and fighting fit in everybody’s eyes
Steve Hansen’s boys were all prepared to give their very best
On parade with Hakas and the fern leaf on their chest.

Their first match with the Pumas at Wembley was staged
The All Blacks keen to strut their stuff, a mighty battle raged
Argentina gave a great display and tried their usual tricks
They ended up with sixteen points, New Zealand twenty-six.

Their next game with Namibia was staged just four days later
“I fear a touch one sided” remarked one commentator
Namibia managed fourteen points, despite this, t’was their fate
To lose to the New Zealand team who clocked up fifty-eight.

On October 3rd at Cardiff they met the Georgian team
A fine array of strapping lads dead keen to let off steam
The Georgians launched some strong attacks, time and time again
But victory went to the boys in black , forty-three points to ten.

The following week in Newcastle they faced the might of Tonga
An eighty minute battle (which seemed a whole lot longer)
The Tongans made great efforts to reach the All Blacks line
But the match went to the champions forty-seven points to nine.

On the 18th, back at Cardiff to play the team from France
In the eyes of English pundits the Frenchmen stood a chance
The gallic team were out of luck, they had so much to do
The final score was treize to France, New Zealand sixty-two.

Just one week later Twickenham where they met the RSA
Better known as Springbocks, who were sure it was their day
From end to end the battle raged with penalties aplenty
South Africa scored eighteen points, the All Blacks won with twenty.

Today we have the final, the Blacks are on a spree
A tough old game but at half time N.Z lead sixteen three.
 Carter’s kicking like a champ, eleven points so far
When Milner-Skudder scored his try, Dan kicked it o’er the bar.

Two minutes in the second half and Nonu scores a try
Carter missed conversion, I can but wonder why
Fifty-two minutes gone, they get a yellow card
Then Pocock scores Australia’s try, by gosh this game is hard.

Foley then converted, Oz is on the move again
But the All Blacks lead the scoreboard by twenty-one to ten.
                                           Nigel Owen is in control he keeps the game quite tight
There’s so much going on at once that I can hardly write.

Australia is still alive, Smith just scored a try
Which Foley very soon converts, they’re just four points away
Then Carter kicks a drop goal ten minutes still to go
New Zealand building up their lead despite the ebb and flow.

The All Blacks have a penalty and Carter does the trick
They now are ten full points ahead, five minutes still to tick
Barratt scored a smashing try which Carter then converted
A try which came from nowhere, how Mr Barratt spurted.
Within the final minute for everyone to see
So once again we must applaud an All Blacks victory.
And that is how I saw it so please try not to curse
This is my very first attempt at commentary in verse.

Alan Parry-Booth..........6.15 pm........31.10.15


Scheme AX AABB CCAA DDEE FFGG XDHH AAII AJKK KKLL MMNN GGOO MJPP QQRRAKAA X
Poetic Form
Metre 111 011010 1101110110101 11000101011 1110101111101 101110011111 11110111011 01111111010101 010101010111001 11011011110101 111101001111110 1101110011100 010010111011111 11101101111101 10101110110101 01011101111111 0101110110101 1100110101101111 010010101101110 11010101101110 011110110111 1011101001010111 10111110110111 00111010010101 01010111111111 01011111110101 11110111101 101111011111 111101011100010 110010110111110 0111010011101 0111111111011 1010101010111 1101111111101 1100010101101 101010111101 101101110101 110111111111 1010101110101 1011101110111 10101001110111 11110111111101 010110111101 11010110111101 1101011110111 11010111010101 01110100010101 11111101110111 10101011101010 0111111101010 010101011011 11011101111100 0111111111111 11110101110001 1010111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 3,087
Words 562
Sentences 24
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 8, 1
Lines Amount 55
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 174
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on November 01, 2015

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Alan Parry-Booth

Born in the valleys of Wales in 1931..His first poem was published when he was only seven years old..Bard to WELSH GUARDS RE-UNITED.and a regular contributor to several other organizations..Alan has written many hundreds of poems during his long life. J.H. 2015 more…

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