Analysis of Why Did God Cry?



Hallowed Eyes
Cast downward
From grey skies

Tears like rain
Washed away
All the pain

Why did God cry?

Gave us Life
Garden homeward
With no strife

"Try one little taste"
Serpent did say
We did not hesitate

Why did God cry?

Constant wandering
Listening still
Fools pondering

Sent his only Son
We all did kill
The Heavenly One

Why did God cry?

Sword of God did raise
Kill and destroy
All who did not praise

Never did learn
Always found joy
In ways to burn

Why did God cry?

Today the blood lust is strong
We blindly believe
In His name we do no wrong

Why does God cry?
You feel the rain?
See His pain?


Scheme aba cdc E fbf xdx E ghg ihi E jkj lkl E mxm ecc
Poetic Form
Metre 101 110 111 111 101 101 1111 111 1010 111 11101 1011 11110 1111 10100 1001 1100 11101 1111 01001 1111 11111 1001 11111 1011 111 0111 1111 0101111 11001 0111111 1111 1101 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 568
Words 117
Sentences 7
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 1, 3, 3, 1, 3, 3, 1, 3, 3, 1, 3, 3
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by JGisoCPA on September 05, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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