Analysis of Choti Si Aas | Short Poem..



Pata Nahi Kya Jadu Tha,
Curant Tere Chune Se Tha,
Aakhon Me Thi Halki Si Chamak,
Kuch Kar Jane Ka Dil Tha,
Par Dar Lagata Hai Is Duniya Se,
Jo Afawah Na Felade,
Baat Bas Itni Si Hai,
Aakhon Me Aas Bachi Hai,
Khwahish Thodi Uchi Hai,
Tere Bhi Thodi Marzi Ho,
Saath Mera Dene Ki,
Alafaz Yaha Main Likhta Hu,
Par Alfazon Ki Dhaar Tu Aur Kalam Hai..


Scheme AABACDEEEEBEE
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11111 111111 111111 1111111 1111 11111 11111 1111 11111 1111 11111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 333
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 263
Words per stanza (avg) 69
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KulDeep Sharma

Birth Name: KulDeep Sharma Born 1 September 1994 Beawar, Rajasthan, India Genres: Hindi/ Punjabi/ Rajasthani Rapping, Freestyle Rapping, Fast & Slow Rapping. Occupations: Rap Song Singer (Rapper), Web Designer, Hindi /Punjabi/ Rajasthani/ Marwadi Song Lyricist, Video Songs Story Writer, Poetry Writer, Story Writer. more…

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