Analysis of There was a Boat.



There was a boat, you drove me to it

At first we were just in your car
With this French guy that never spoke
but made it clear that he was French somehow

He served the purpose of showing how there always had to be someone between us
They never needed to speak to be present
It was either a French guy here or a Dutch girl there

But in the boat, there was just us
It was reserved for A and B
With no holds and unlimited covers to build up our walls together
To stay conceiled from the outside world's waves of interruption

You were constantly asking me to go swimming with you
And I used to refuse on account of my unwavering hate for Chlorine and it's resentful burn on my eyes everytime
And that stench!
But this was no pool
There always seems to be a 'but' after all the things you wanted to do with me...
But this, but that...but if...what if?

But this was different.
It's the boat.
It's the open water.

It's the fact that even though we were docked and fastened on to land,
A breakaway would be just as easy

But this...was just a dream.
But that...never happened.
But if...you ever drove me to a boat.
What if...that's where we finally come together?


Scheme X XXX ABX ACDX XXXXCX BED XC XXED
Poetic Form
Metre 110111111 11101011 11111101 111111111 110101101111111011 11010111110 1110011110111 10011111 11011001 1110010010111101010 1111011111010 10100101111011 011101101110100111001010111110 011 11111 1111101101011101111 111111 111100 101 101010 1011101101010111 010111110 11101 1110 111011101 11111001010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,135
Words 228
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 4, 6, 3, 2, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on April 09, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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