Analysis of No Candy This Year



The eggs had been colored,
and all scattered about

The baskets were hidden,
as the children now shout…

“Was he here mom, was he here?"
they yell from upstairs

“Come down and find out,”
she says with nary a care

Their little feet rush down,
taking two steps at once

As wide eyes dart all over,
now playing their hunch

Through the living and dining rooms
they tear with a fever

And no corner is safe,
from the incursion of either

“I found it, I found it,"
the bigger one said

As the smaller one stood saddened,
--- a heart filled with dread

“I guess the Bunny forgot,
and there's no candy this year”

And from across the big room,
you could see the start of a tear

“The Bunny never forgets,”
their mother cried out

"You have to look harder,
both inside and out”

And as the front door was opened,
the little one chimed...

“Mom, he didn’t forget,
--- it was outside all the time”

(From my new Children's Book dedicated to my Grandchildren)


Scheme XA BA XX AC XX DX XD XD XE FE XX XC XA DA FX XX B
Poetic Form
Metre 011110 011001 010010 101011 1111111 11101 11011 1111001 110111 101111 1111110 11011 10100101 111010 011011 10010110 111111 01011 10101110 01111 1101001 0111011 0101011 11101101 0101001 11011 111110 10101 01011110 01011 11101 1111101 11110110001110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 931
Words 180
Sentences 3
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on April 03, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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