Analysis of Please don't go



I think that all my thoughts are useless
They can't be all nurtured by you always
I guess I live just a worthwhile, for the meantime
I am at a river by its bank searching its end
You are at the opening looking the beginning

What would have happened if roads were same?
What would have happened if ways were same?
Thoughts can't be bound by limitations
Thoughts just can't change so often
Insane, psychic as I am now and then

Roots, bloody roots have the problem
Why scold a fruit, roots have failed
There are words that must be said
There are words must be heard
That there’s nothing mean as quite absurd

It’s now or never,
I prey it not to be over,
All voices can't chant prayer
All people are normal me just a sober
New world find the new ones, not the old slayer

Curse me, hate me, and slap me that’s O.K
Leave me alone in the darkness
Coz I am so scared of the light
That I might never see.


Scheme AXXXX BBXXX XXXCC DDXDD XAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111110 111110111 11111011101 1110101111011 1110100100010 111101101 111101101 11111010 1111110 0110111101 11011010 1101111 1111111 111111 111011101 11110 11111110 110111 11011011010 11101110110 1111011111 11010010 11111101 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 877
Words 177
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted by Azalea Spirit on October 04, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Abinash Parajuli

Abinash Parajuli is a Nepali poet, novelist, music critic and a journalist. Currently, he's acting a CEO/Executive Editor at MuzBuzz Monthly Magazine. more…

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