Analysis of Vengence
She mumbled at night with rage that strung her head
It’s been a hectic day to revenge though I could smile
But no, a day wasted without revenge and canopy covered smile
Yes, carry on in your head. A princess to turn me beheaded
She mumbled my revered life with a knife of hollow love
And gestured my heart clinching her fist all at once and cloned
And the midnight mare ruined the eyes. Yes red eye cried alone
And banged her knee to my memories, evoking all I would have gained
A queen of light, far beyond imagination, provoked him to die
A coffin of hooks and spikes to the dead maim, shufti to hear a cry
Buried alive in a deep blue sea so the carcass of soul would never fly
On I choked, suffocated my air with smile. Just asked, I won’t deny my grave
She abandoned my fate, never believed in my words
All was like a cloned mirage of love. Never demanded
Won’t have been a sin, if asked someday I’d jump of cliff
Won’t have been so hard just asked I’d have cut my veins
Remain alive till the moment heart pumped each ounce of blood
And then be declared dead as a stone.
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Metre | 11011111101 1101011011111 11011001010100101 1101011010111010 11010111011101 01011100111101 00111001111101 01011110001011111 0111101001001111 0101101101111101 1001001111010111101 111100111111110111 1010111001011 11101011110010 111011111111 111111111111 01011010111111 011011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,069 |
Words | 210 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 211 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 53 |
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