Analysis of Prayers
Every song reminds me of my love, like always
Every song relates me to those moments, like I’m drowned
When I breathe, every air reminds me of what she owe me
Every day reminds me of my life when I tried so hard and I fail
What stories this story possesses? Me alongside
Longing for the sun to shine on me some day
I travail to smile, she ruptured my bleeding lips
I gave up smiling; she crushed my heart gently into a crusher machine
Now the heart is broken, yet it prays for you only
Now minds are vacant, yet they think of you only
Now this life is deserted, yet they want your life be bloomed
Now these breathe are absurd, yet they pass on towards the last one
Scanty eyes look lovely, moist with prayers, not to hurt you
Fragile smile once in a while, couldn’t keep me at ease at all
And sometimes the wind blows with the scent of your hairs
God! How seriously I pray? To bring back those old days
God! How humbly I pray? Keep me at some ease with care.
Truncated with a blunt knife, scratching a heart with care
Scheme | AXBX XXXX BBXX XXXACC |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 100101111111 10010111110111 111100101111111 100101111111111011 1101100101011 10101111111 101111101101 111101111100101001 1011101111110 111101111110 11110101111111 111101111101011 1011101111111 10110011111111 001011101111 11100011111111 1110111111111 101011100111 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,004 |
Words | 199 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 44 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 200 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 50 |
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