Analysis of I want to make you smile as you do to me
I want to make you smile as you do to me.
I’m longing you saw my thoughts right through my eyes.
You ask me what I’m thinking. I can’t tell you.
You are the stars, and I thy empty skies.
In me there is a yearning ever flowing
That needs to reach an end that never comes.
I cannot be myself without you with me.
This is a truth no wisdom ever plumbs.
You laugh, and say that I’m your personal angel,
And this is what I want so much to be.
The beauty of my life is like a passion
That blows right through the person that you see.
| Scheme | ABXB XXAB XAXA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Quatrain |
| Metre | 11111111111 11011111111 11111101111 1101011101 01110101010 1111111101 1101101111 1101110101 110111110010 0111111111 01011111010 1111010111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 524 |
| Words | 110 |
| Sentences | 10 |
| Stanzas | 3 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 12 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
| Words per line (avg) | 9 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 134 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 37 |
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