Analysis of aden noire



softly whispers the soft light
breezes dancing about me
glimmering sunlight above
dwindling beams within the dusk
as lightly I step upon the moist grass ….
n' clouds cast dear shadows
glancing above in blinding light
a bird hovers as if a kite …
dancing across the rippling
rivulets of a sparkling river
shadows creeping foretell the nights approaching silence,
the winds beside me singing then whistling shrill n' chilly,
as the path shows me the way downward towards waters edge …
a frog chirps and splashes about as my reflection watches
the trees swaying behind me …
a name was lost in the sound of shivering reeds along the rocky river shore,
aden noire a thought once heard calling twice from distant forest,
the gurgling river thru broken tree limbs giggled
as voices from beneath the surface whispered
tis’ getting late n’ you must leave now or perhaps
stay forever and rest and wait for aden noire


Scheme ABCDEFAAGHIBJKBLMNOPH
Poetic Form
Metre 1010011 1010011 100101 10010101 1101101011 11111 10010101 01101101 10010100 1101010 110010101010 01011101101110 10111011001101 011010011101010 0110011 01110011100101010101 101011110111010 0100101101110 11010101010 110111111101 101001011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 902
Words 158
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 736
Words per stanza (avg) 158
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Submitted by coralatlas on September 15, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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