Analysis of Down the River



Hark, the sound of it drawing nearer,
Clink of hobble and brazen bell;
Mark the passage of stalwart shearer,
Bidding Monaro soil farewell.

Where is he making for?  Down the river,
Down the river with eager tread;
Where is he making for?  Down the river,
Down the river to seek a 'shed'.

Where is his dwelling on old Monaro?
Buckley's Crossing, or Jindaboine?
Dry Plain is it, or sweet Bolaira?
P'raps 'tis near where the rivers join
Where is he making for? Down the river.
When, oh when, will he turn him back?
Soft sighs follow him down the river,
Moist eyes gaze at his fading track.

See, behind him his pack-horse, ambling,
Bears the weight of his master's kit,
Oft and oft from the pathway rambling,
Crops unhampered by cruel bit.
Where is he making for?  Equine rover,
Sturdy nag from the Eucumbene,
Tempted down by the thought of clover,
Springing luscious in Riverine.

Dreams of life and its future chances,
Snatch of song to beguile the way;
Through green crannies the sunlight glances,
Silver-gilding the bright 'Jack Shay'.
"So long, mate, I can stay no longer,
So long, mate, I've no time to stop,
Pens are waiting me at Mahonga,
Bluegong, Grubben and Pullitop.

"What! you say that the river's risen?
What! that the melted snow has come?
What! that it locks and bars our prison?
Many's the mountain stream I've swum.
I must onward and cross the river,
So long, mate, for I cannot stay;
I must onward and cross the river,
Over the river there lies my way."

One man short when the roll they're calling;
One man short at old Bobby Rand's;
Heads are drooping and tears are falling
Up on Monaro's mountain lands.

Where is he making for? Down the river,
Down the river of slimy bed;
Where is he making for? Down the river,
Down the river that bears him, dead.


Scheme abab AcAc adadAeae fgfgadad xhxhaiei djdjAhAh fkfk AcAc
Poetic Form
Metre 101111010 11100101 101011010 10111 1111011010 10101101 1111011010 10101101 11110111 11011 1111111 111110101 1111011010 11111111 111011010 11111101 1011111100 10111101 10110110 10101101 111101110 101101 101101110 101001 111011010 11110101 11100110 10100111 111111110 11111111 1110111 1101 111101010 11010111 1111011010 1010111 111001010 11111101 111001010 100101111 111101110 11111101 111001110 111101 1111011010 10101101 1111011010 10101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,725
Words 321
Sentences 29
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 8, 8, 8, 8, 4, 4
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:39 min read
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Barcroft Henry Thomas Boake

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