Analysis of The Dead-beat

Wilfred Owen 1893 (Oswestry) – 1918 (Sambre–Oise Canal)



He dropped, - more sullenly than wearily,
Lay stupid like a cod, heavy like meat,
And none of us could kick him to his feet;
-just blinked at my revolver, blearily;
- Didn't appear to know a war was on,
Or see the blasted trench at which he stared.
'I'll do 'em in,' he whined. 'If this hand's spared,
I'll murder them, I will.'

A low voice said,
'It's Blighty, p'raps, he sees; his pluck's all gone,
Dreaming of all the valiant, that aren't dead:
Bold uncles, smiling ministerially;
Maybe his brave young wife, getting her fun
In some new home, improved materially.
It's not these stiffs have crazed him; nor the Hun.'

We sent him down at last, out of the way.
Unwounded; - stout lad, too, before that strafe.
Malingering? Stretcher-bearers winked, 'Not half!'

Next day I heard the Doc's well-whiskied laugh:
'That scum you sent last night soon died. Hooray!'


Scheme ABBAXCCX DXDAEAE FXG GF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 11111100 1101011011 0111111111 11110101 1001110111 1101011111 1110111111 110111 0111 1111111111 10110101101 110101 1011111001 01110101000 1111111101 1111111101 11110111 11010111 111101111 1111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 868
Words 160
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 3, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Wilfred Owen

Wilfred Edward Salter Owen MC was an English poet and soldier, one of the leading poets of the First World War. more…

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