Analysis of Vain Death



ALL the first night she might not weep   
 But watched till morning came,   
And when she slept at dawn, she heard   
 The dead man call her name.   

The second night she watched and wept           
 And called on death for grace,   
And when she slept before the dawn   
 She saw the dead man’s face.   

The third night through she laughed as one   
 That knows her way to bliss,           
And in the instant ere she slept   
 She felt the dead man’s kiss.   

She rose and faced the flickering fire   
 (And oh, but she was fair!),   
Like a wild witch behind her danced           
 The shadow of her hair.   

She took her penknife from its sheath,   
 The tender blade she kissed,   
And by the firelight’s dying leap   
 She bared her little wrist.           

And where the vein ran large and blue   
 She cut, once and again,   
Yet ere she swooned from life, she knew   
 Her death had been in vain.   

For while life thundered in her ears,           
 Ere yet her pulse might fail,   
Far off across the kindless night   
 She heard the dead man’s wail,   

And knew her doom was one with theirs   
 That kill the life God gave,           
And that she might not leave this earth   
 Her soul alive to save,   
But ay must dwell within that house   
 As in a living grave,   

While he for whom she died might ne’er           
 Win to her in that place,   
But must for ever make his moan   
Ranging in agony alone   
 The trackless void of space


Scheme ABXB CDXD XECE XFXF XGAG HXHX XIXI XJXJXJ XDKKD
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111 111101 01111111 011101 01011101 011111 01110101 110111 01111111 110111 00010111 110111 1101010010 011111 10110101 01101 1101111 010111 0101101 110101 01011101 111001 11111111 011101 11110001 110111 1101011 110111 01011111 110111 01111111 010111 11110111 100101 11111111 110011 11110111 10010001 01111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,447
Words 252
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6, 5
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Archibald Thomas Strong

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