Analysis of The Black Hawk War of the Artists

Vachel Lindsay 1879 (Springfield) – 1931 (Springfield)



WRITTEN FOR LORADO TAFT'S STATUE OF BLACK HAWK AT OREGON, ILLINOIS

To be given in the manner of the Indian Oration and the Indian War-Cry.

Hawk of the Rocks,
Yours is our cause to-day.
Watching your foes
Here in our war array,
Young men we stand,
Wolves of the West at bay.
Power, power for war
Comes from these trees divine;
Power from the boughs,
Boughs where the dew-beads shine,
Power from the cones
Yea, from the breath of the pine!

Power to restore
All that the white hand mars.
See the dead east
Crushed with the iron cars—
Chimneys black
Blinding the sun and stars!

Hawk of the pines,
Hawk of the plain-winds fleet,
You shall be king
There in the iron street,
Factory and forge
Trodden beneath your feet.

There will proud trees
Grow as they grow by streams.
There will proud thoughts
Walk as in warrior dreams.
There will proud deeds
Bloom as when battle gleams!

Warriors of Art,
We will hold council there,
Hewing in stone
Things to the trapper fair,
Painting the gray
Veils that the spring moons wear,
This our revenge,
This one tremendous change:
Making new towns,
Lit with a star-fire strange,
Wild as the dawn
Gilding the bison-range.

All the young men
Chanting your cause that day,
Red-men, new-made
Out of the Saxon clay,
Strong and redeemed,
Bold in your war-array!


Scheme X X XAXAXABCXCXC BDXDXD XEXEXE XFXFXF XGXGAGXHXHXH XAXAXA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Etheree  (26%)
Metre 101111111110001 11100010101000100010011 1101 1110111 1011 1010101 1111 110111 101011 111101 10101 110111 10101 1101101 10101 110111 1011 110101 101 100101 1101 110111 1111 100101 10001 100111 1111 111111 1111 1101001 1111 111101 10011 111101 1001 110101 1001 110111 11001 110101 1011 1101101 1101 100101 1011 101111 1111 110101 1001 101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,249
Words 231
Sentences 13
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 12, 6, 6, 6, 12, 6
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Vachel Lindsay

Nicholas Vachel Lindsay was an American poet. more…

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