Analysis of Sleep

Archibald Lampman 1861 (Upper Canada) – 1899 (Ottawa, Canada)



If any man, with sleepless care oppressed,
On many a night had risen, and addressed
His hand to make him out of joy and moan
An image of sweet sleep in carven stone,
Light touch by touch, in weary moments planned,
He would have wrought her with a patient hand,
Not like her brother death, with massive limb
And dreamless brow, unstartled, changeless, dim,
But very fair, though fitful and afraid,
More sweet and slight than any mortal maid.
Her hair he would have carved a mantle smooth
Down to her tender feet to wrap and soothe
All fevers in, yet barbed here and there
With many a hidden sting of restless care;
Her brow most quiet, thick with opiate rest,
Yet watchfully lined, as if some hovering guest
Of noiseless doubt were there; so too her eyes
His light hand would have carved in cunning wise
Broad with all languor of the drowsy South,
Most beautiful, but held askance; her mouth
More soft and round than any rose half-spread,
Yet ever twisted with some nervous dread.
He would have made her with one marble foot,
Frail as a snow-white feather, forward put,
Bearing sweet medicine for all distress,
Smooth languor and unstrung forgetfulness;
The other held a little back for dread;
One slender moonpale hand held forth to shed
Soft slumber dripping from its pearly tip
Into wide eyes; the other on her lip.
So in the watches of his sleepless care
The cunning artist would have wrought her fair;
Shy goddess, at keen seeking most afraid
Yet often coming, when we last have prayed.


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGAAHHIIJJKKLHJJMMGGEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110101 11001110001 1111111101 110111011 1111010101 1111010101 1101011101 011111 1101110001 1101110101 0111110101 1101011101 110011101 11001011101 01110111001 1111111001 111011101 1111110101 111110101 1100110101 1101110111 1101011101 1111011101 1101110101 1011001101 11011 0101010111 110111111 1101011101 0111010101 1001011101 0101011101 1101110101 1101011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,465
Words 268
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,185
Words per stanza (avg) 266
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Archibald Lampman

Archibald Lampman FRSC was a Canadian poet. "He has been described as 'the Canadian Keats;' and he is perhaps the most outstanding exponent of the Canadian school of nature poets." The Canadian Encyclopedia says that he is "generally considered the finest of Canada's late 19th-century poets in English." Lampman is classed as one of Canada's Confederation Poets, a group which also includes Charles G.D. Roberts, Bliss Carman, and Duncan Campbell Scott. more…

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